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雅思大作文結(jié)尾段可以這樣寫

雅思寫作考試中，無論是那一部分，好的開頭要有，精彩的結(jié)尾也要有。那么雅思大 作文 結(jié)尾段怎么寫呢?要知道干脆漂亮的結(jié)尾段也是會讓雅思考官眼前一亮。接下來我為大家分享幾招，幫助大家寫出一個漂亮的結(jié)尾。

雅思大作文結(jié)尾段可以這樣寫

招式一：回答問題 answer the question

E.g.1

When a country develops its ; the skills and ways of life die out.It is pointless to try and keep them alive.

To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

In , without that all is good, I think it is by no means ‘ pointless’, in any way, to try to keep alive with .We should not ignore , because it can be our friend and support our way of life.

這個結(jié)尾段落明確的提出了自己的觀點，不是所有的科技都是好的，但是科技也不是完全沒有用處的。

招式二：不要添加新的信息 not apply any new

E.g.2

Happiness is to be very important in life.

Why is it difficult to define? What factors are important in achieving happiness?

Like self-awareness, this is also very difficult to achieve, but I think these are the two factors that may be the most important for achieving happiness.

用1句話明確自己的觀點，幸福很難定義，可能有兩個因素起到作用。

招式三：2-3個 句子 為宜 2-3 sentences are enough

E.g.3

Some people believe that children’s leisure must be ; otherwise they are a complete waste of time.

Do you agree or disagree?

Finally, I think it is also important to remember that children need to relax as well as work.If they do must have some or academic relevance, then they will soon get tired of studying , which is the last thing parents would want.

2句話，作者的態(tài)度很明確，學(xué)生不可能花所有的時間去學(xué)習(xí)，否者就會完全失去對學(xué)習(xí)的興趣，所以也應(yīng)該給學(xué)生一些放松的時間。

一般在結(jié)尾段的最開始部分，考生就應(yīng)該給考官一個明確的信號詞，讓考官了解 文章 已經(jīng)進入尾聲了。這里所謂的信號詞就是一些結(jié)尾段的套句：

信號詞：Finally, to sum up, in , in brief, therefore, thus, overall

句型：

1. it can be concluded that…

2. we can find that…

3. I think it is also important to remember that

4. the main point is to make sure that

5. I believe that/ , I think that/ I would say that/ I agree that/ My view is that

招式四：可采用的技巧

1. 總結(jié) 式(重述前文)

把在前文中的觀點在結(jié)尾段進行重述，但是不能出現(xiàn)與開頭段或者題目中的單詞重復(fù)。

E.g.4

_n many countries schools have severe problems with student behaviour.

What do you think are the cause of this?

What solutions can you suggest?

Perhaps parenting classes are needed to help them to do this, and high quality nursery schools could be that would support families more in terms of raising the next .The should fund this kind of parental support, because this is no longer a problem for families, but for society as a whole.

把solutions進行的簡單的再次描寫--父母、好的托兒所、*的資金扶助。

_owadays we are producing more and more rubbish.Why do you think this is happening? What can do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced?

I think, therefore, that need to raise this awareness in the general public.Children can be educated about issues at school, but adults need to take action. can encourage such action by putting taxes on packaging, such as plastic bags, by providing recycling services and by fining and shops that do not attempt to recycle their waste.

重述上文的內(nèi)容，由*采取 措施 —提高意識(children & adult)

--具體措施(提高價格、循環(huán)利用、罰款)

2.兩分式

把文章涉及到的主題人或者物分成兩種，對其進行分別的說明。

E.g.5

_n many countries children are engaged in some kind of paid work.Some people regard this ad wrong, while others consider it as valuable work , important for learning and taking .What are your opinions on this?

, in better economic , few parents would choose to send their children out to full-time paid work.If learning and work are to be important, then children can acquire these by having light, part-time jobs or even doing tasks such as helping their parents around the family home, which are unpaid, but of value in children's .

對于有錢的家庭而言，家長很少送小孩去做童工;如果是為了錢或者其他，可做兼職。

_ome people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change.Others, however, think that change is always a good thing.

Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In , I would say that change can be and for when they pursue it , but that all change, including that which is imposed on people, does not have good outcomes.

如果是人們自己的選擇那么改變是一件好的事情，但如果是被強加于身，改變則不會帶來任何可喜的效果。

3.折中式

很難判斷

In , I do not think其中到底誰占據(jù)主導(dǎo)地位，或者什么是最重要的，兩者是缺一不可的，需共同存在。

E.g.6

Research indicates that the we are born with have much more influence on our and than any we may have in our life.

That either nature or nurture is the major influence on a person, but that both have powerful effects.How these factors interact is still unknown today and they remain largely in a person's life.

兩者是缺一不可的，天賦和后天培養(yǎng)同等重要。

4.轉(zhuǎn)折對比式

提出另一種群體，與之相比，會產(chǎn)生什么效果來支持自己的觀點。

E.g.7

sports can earn a great deal of more money than people in other important .Some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfair.

, I think that the amount of money such sports stars make is more justified than the huge earnings of movie stars, but at the same time, it indicates that our society places more value on sport than on more essential and .

把運動員與其他方面的工作人員進行對比—比上不足比下有余。

雅思寫作：英文寫作的困境與對策

有些學(xué)生在考試時一見到作文題，便感到很對自己的胃口，覺得有很多內(nèi)容要寫。于是乎千言萬語涌上心頭，寫著前一句想著后一句。往往前句尚未寫完便接上了后一句，辛辛苦苦寫了一大堆，猶覺余意未盡。結(jié)果令判卷的老師頭疼不己，無法繼續(xù)往下看。原因就在于這種沒有構(gòu)思、未理提綱的作文章法太亂，語言質(zhì)量差。無論是四、六級考試還是研究生入學(xué)考試，我國的作文試題都是規(guī)定式作文(的writing)，這跟國外考試(如TOEE)不一樣。因此，寫作時必須按給出的提綱或提示去寫，任何過于放任自由的做法都是不可取的，更不要另有所圖，滔滔不絕。這是進入實際操作前的一個基本認識問題，稍不留神就會出問題。

滔滔不絕“意識流”

控制這種“意識流”的寫法，必須嚴格按照三點提綱來寫。假如*段要求描述某個現(xiàn)象，務(wù)必不要先進行的原因分析，否則到了第二段該分析原因的時候就沒東西可寫了。明智的做法是投其所好，該怎樣就怎樣，這一原則適用于所有的考試。另外，有的考生一方面有話則多，一發(fā)而不可收，控制不了自己;一方面無話則隱，該說的話沒的有說出來。我們不妨把作文的要求量化到每一個段落:一篇200詞左右的作文一般不會超過15句話，把這15句話根據(jù)題目要求分配到各段中去，每一段大模只說那么幾句話，絕不多說。事實上往往是說得越多，錯誤越多。因此，跟著提綱走，每一段不要寫得太多，點到為止，見好就收，這才是最穩(wěn)妥的對策。

無話可說真難受

無話可說是滔滔不絕的對立面。有的考生題目看得懂，提綱也一目了然，就是不知道該說什么，在考場上頭腦一片空白，想到的也只是空泛的東西。這是一種常見的現(xiàn)象。在這種情況下，即使是用中文也難以寫好，更何況要用英文去表達。針對這一情況，辦法就是要善于聯(lián)想到一些具體的事實、的具體的例證以及具體的現(xiàn)象。聯(lián)想起具體細小的事情，再形成觀點。把看得見摸得著的事物帶來的思考變成作文里的實質(zhì)內(nèi)容，這不失為一種很好的策略。

平時多練勤思考

在寫作時頭腦出現(xiàn)空白，應(yīng)該由具體細小的、的瑣碎的、的微不足道的事物所引發(fā)的思考形成觀點，再進行論述。這種定式思維的形成需要平時多下功夫多練習(xí)。從無話可說到有話可說，有個例子讓人不無啟發(fā)。在種.種場合下，經(jīng)常要歡迎領(lǐng)導(dǎo)講幾句話。領(lǐng)導(dǎo)往往首先開口說:同志們大家好，我利用這個機會講三句話。講*句話時，腦的子里不知道第二句話是什么，講第二句話時，根本就沒想第三句話要說什么。但他最終說了三句話，以“謝謝大家”的結(jié)束講話。領(lǐng)導(dǎo)講話“1、2、3”成了一種定式，他總能找到有關(guān)內(nèi)容講幾點，這種功夫是長期磨練的結(jié)果。

真情流露沒必要

考試時，監(jiān)考老師通常發(fā)現(xiàn)有的考生坐在那里根本就是在玩深沉，他在那里思考人生的偉大哲理;他在那里要想出一個觀點，想出一個理由，想出一個措施，非要顯得與眾不同。陷入這種境地的考生，顯然犯了一個根本性的錯誤。參考時間為40分鐘的作文，一般應(yīng)該在35分鐘之內(nèi)完成，再用幾分鐘的時間檢查語言錯誤?？捎械目忌畮追昼娨痪湓挾紝懖涣?，就是因為他太進入角色了，他想向判卷的老師掏心掏肺。這是一個很大的誤區(qū)。

表達順暢最關(guān)鍵

考作文的目的純粹是通過這一命題形式，考查考生的英語水平怎樣。命題人關(guān)注的是書面表達能力是否順暢，而不是看一個人有沒有內(nèi)容，思想有沒有深度。千萬不要去猜測判卷的老師喜歡什么觀點。只有當作文明顯跑題時，內(nèi)容才體現(xiàn)出其重要性。不管原因也好，措施也好，某一考生想到的任何一點，很可能命題人早已料到，而且肯定會被成千上萬的考生重復(fù)無數(shù)遍。因而曾經(jīng)令自己激動一時的想法，在判卷的老師看來全無感覺。規(guī)定式作文的拓展空間本來就非常有限，所以只要把作文按命題要求表達順暢是關(guān)鍵。

英語表達憋得慌

很多學(xué)生在作文時*障礙就是用英語表達意思很困難。對于這一點，首先要樹立信心。實際上，大部分考生都受過正規(guī)的*英語 教育 ，即使是一些自學(xué)的考生，其英語水平也足以寫好一篇 考研 作文。關(guān)鍵在于要把這種潛力挖掘出來?！独饰脑~典》(Longman的)的*特點，就是用2000個核心詞來解釋幾十萬個詞條，而且詞條大都有幾個義l項。由此可見，并不一定要用多么復(fù)雜l的英語來表達，也不一定非得添加一些高難度的單詞以加深判卷老師的印象。事實上，簡單的語言也能表達復(fù)雜的事物。著名的美國作家海明威的作品以其明白曉暢的語言吸引了千千萬萬的讀者，就是一個明證。

英語思維不現(xiàn)實

用英語思維來寫作文是不現(xiàn)實的。如果能用英語思維，也就談不上會遇到多大的困難了。在實際寫作過程當中，腦子里想的是中文句子，然后把一個一個的中文句子譯成英文。在翻譯的時候努力尋求一一對應(yīng)的關(guān)系，希望找到與中文詞對應(yīng)的英文單詞。結(jié)果句子結(jié)構(gòu)和單詞的選用受到中文的影響，自己感覺上也是“憋”得費勁，或者覺得表達出來了，意思差不多，而實際上給人的感覺依然還是中文。若是讓老外來看這篇作文的話，也許根本就弄不清楚文章的內(nèi)容，而判卷的*老師在判卷時往往能想象出文章是怎樣寫出來的。在這種情況下，出路在于把中文譯成英文時，不要去追求一一對應(yīng)的關(guān)系，而應(yīng)該“得其意，忘其形”。

語言表達簡單化

在寫作時用簡單的語言把復(fù)雜的意思表達出來也可謂之偉大。對于一個一時找不著詞的概念，應(yīng)該用一種迂回曲折的方式把意思表達清楚?；蛴靡粋€ 短語 ，或用一個從句，或三言兩語，如果沒出什么語言錯誤的話，這也算是一種偉大!

處于被動危害大

很多人在寫作過程中從頭至尾都處于被動狀態(tài)，當有內(nèi)容想要表達清楚的時候，卻又發(fā)現(xiàn)種.種途徑都不可能表達好，只好硬著頭皮把自己意識到?jīng)]把握的東西勉強寫上去。毫無疑問，這種連自己都意識到可能是錯誤的東西，只會產(chǎn)生于己不利的負面作用。所以，當有的內(nèi)容感覺一點找不著、的英語實在表達不清楚的時候，就應(yīng)該徹底地放棄。開動腦筋多想幾點內(nèi)容、的理由和措施，假設(shè)想到四條理由，但因為語言表達的問題，其中一條理由說不清楚，那么就應(yīng)當機立斷地把它放棄，寫上另外三點理由就可以了(或許兩點就夠了)。由此可見，積極主動的態(tài)度會使自己在考試中有更大的靈活性。

雅思作文寫好后需要檢查的10個點

1.是否使用了正確的語法結(jié)構(gòu)，比方說，動詞時態(tài)一致、主謂一致、用詞準確、詞性(尤其是名詞、動詞、形容詞)、名詞單復(fù)數(shù)、冠詞錯誤和介詞錯誤。

2.句式是否有變化 (如各種從句的使用、分詞結(jié)構(gòu)等 )

3.使用了一定的詞匯量 ( 如用 同義詞 或詞組來避免過多的重復(fù))

4.標點、拼寫沒有錯誤。

5.在每段的主題句中都表明了這個段落的中心思想，所有擴展句都緊扣主題。

6.使用了過渡性詞語，因而句子之間和段落之間都有邏輯性和條理性。

7.每一段話都得到充分的展開。

8.提供了足夠的細節(jié)、例子或論據(jù)。

9.明確的觀點。

10.每一段話都緊扣文章的主題。

1、3、4、6為考試時檢查的重點，*檢查首段，和每段的首末句。

雅思寫作 范文 ：rubbish problem

Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced?

I think it is true that in almost every country today each household and family produces a large amount of waste every week. Most of this rubbish comes from the packaging from the things we buy, such as processed food. But even if we buy fresh food without packaging, we still produce rubbish from the plastic bags used to carry shopping home.

The reason why we have so much packaging is that we consume so much more on a daily basis than families did in the past. is also very important in modern life, so we buy packaged or canned food that can be from long distances and stored until we need it, first in the , and then at home.

However, the amount of waste produced is also a result of our tendency to use something once and throw it away. We forget that even the cheapest plastic bag has used up valuable resources and energy to produce. We also forget that it is a source of pollution and difficult to dispose of.

I think, therefore, that need to raise this awareness in the general public. Children can be educated about issues at school, but adults need to take action. can encourage such action by putting taxes on packaging, such as plastic bags, by providing recycling services and by fining and shops that do not attempt to recycle their waste.

With the political will, such measures could really reduce the amount of rubbish we produce. Certainly nobody wants to see our resources used up and our planet poisoned by waste.

雅思140315寫作task2例文

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　一考情分析
小作文考試類別1月9日-6月28日(共24次)
首先用一張表格呈現(xiàn)以下上半年的閱讀考情
小作文考試題型
根據(jù)所繪制出來的表格，不難得出幾個結(jié)論：
首先，在圖表題中，相比靜態(tài)圖(12.5%)而言，動態(tài)圖(62.5%)的考試出現(xiàn)比例依然占了絕大部分。
其次，數(shù)據(jù)題(75%)依然占主導(dǎo)地位，但是非數(shù)據(jù)題(25%)的比例較往年有所上升。流程圖和地圖題在去年分別才出現(xiàn)3次，今年才截止到6月，兩者都已經(jīng)打破往年規(guī)律，以分別出現(xiàn)3次的頻率讓很多考生措手不及。
*，其它數(shù)據(jù)題型的考查相對穩(wěn)定，雖然柱圖和餅圖的考查較往年相比有所下降，但柱圖和線圖依然是圖表類作文的重中之重。
二 小作文真題分類匯總
表格
1The table shows changes of in Australia and Malaysia from 1980 to 2002. 動態(tài)圖(140222)
2The table below shows the number of people (millions) taking part in five different physical between 2001 and 2009. 動態(tài)圖(140524)
3The following table shows the income and of City Hall in a three-year period. 動態(tài)圖(140213)
4The table below shows the on age, income and poverty in three states in USA in 2000. 靜態(tài)圖(140109)
地圖題
1 The maps show changes that took place in a city from 1960 to now. 變遷題 (140517)
2. The maps below show a village park now and ten years ago. 變遷題(140621)
3. The diagram below shows the present college and its plan in 2015 for proposed . 變遷題(140301)
柱圖
1. The bar chart below shows the share of the world between 1840 and 2000 in three . 動態(tài)圖(140315)
2. The charts below show and rainfall in an Climate and a climate. 動態(tài)圖(140515)
3. The bar charts below show the of males’ watching and in six sporting , including rugby, football, , badminton, fishing, horse and racing. 靜態(tài)圖(140424)
4. The bar charts below show four ways of dealing with rubbish by burnt, treated, recycled and landfill in , Italy, Spain and UK. 靜態(tài)圖 (140313)
5. The chart below shows the aid from six developed countries to countries from 2008 to 2010. 動態(tài)圖(140607)
6. The bar charts below show the of film released and ticket sales in 1996 and 2001. 動態(tài)圖(140426)
綜合題
1. The bar chart gives us the about the life in Japan, United States, Korea and Indonesia and the table shows us the change in the life between 1953 and 2008. 靜態(tài)柱+動態(tài)表(140628)
2. The line graph shows the average price of tickets at a theater and the bar chart shows the average of tickets sold. 動態(tài)線+靜態(tài)柱(140118)
線圖
1.The line graph shows the quantity of goods by four different modes of transport in an European country from 1980 with until 2015. 動態(tài)圖(140412)
2. The line graph shows the of students following different types of courses in a college in 1985 to 2005. It also shows a forecast of 2015. 動態(tài)圖(140201)
3. The graph below shows the number of oversea visitors who came to the UK for different purpose between 1989 and 2009. 動態(tài)圖(140619)
4. The line graph shows the change of spending on pensions, education and health from 2001 and projected to 2051. 動態(tài)圖(140405)
5. The line graph below shows the of good quality water in four countries between 1950 and 2000. It also predicts the further of good quality water in 2015. 動態(tài)圖(140215)
流程圖
1. The diagram shows how to make soft cheese.(140510)
2. The diagram shows the process of recycling glass bottles to make new ones.(140111)
3. The diagrams below show three methods companies choose to recruit new employees.(140308)
三、大作文真題匯總分類
*類：
1. Towns and cities are places. Some suggest the should spend money putting in more works of art like paintings and statues to make them better to live in. Do you agree or disagree? 單邊(140213)
社會類：
1. Some people believe that the best way to produce a happier society is to ensure that there only small between the richest and the poorest members. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 單邊(140201)
2. An number of people change their careers and places of residence several times during their life. Is it a positive or negative ? 單邊(積極或消極)(140405)
3. Employers should give staffs at least four weeks’ holiday a year as employees can be better at their work. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this viewpoint? 單邊(140515)
4. An number of people are changing their careers. What are the reasons? Do you think it is positive or negative? 混合類 (140621)
5. Nowadays many young people choose to change their jobs . What are the causes of the situation? Do the outweigh the ? 混合類(140111)
6. Some people think that it is important for all cities and towns to have large public spaces such as parks and squares. Do you agree or disagree? 單邊(140315)
7. Some people believe that if a police force carries a gun, it will encourage higher levels of violence in the whole society. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 單邊(140607)
8. Some people think that living in big cities is bad for people’s health. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 單邊(140301)
9. Some people think that men should take on housework tasks (such as cleaning, childcare)as women，do you agree or disagree? 單邊(140510)
環(huán)境類：
1. community must ensure that all countries reduce the of fossil fuels such as gas and oil. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 單邊(140125)
2. With the demand for energy sources of oil and gas, people should look for sources of oil and gas in remote and untouched places. Do the outweigh the of damaging such areas? 單邊(優(yōu)缺點)(140628)
3. Some people think that the best way for a to solve the problem of traffic is to provide free public transport 24 hours a day 7 days a week. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 單邊(140109)
抽象類：
1. Some people think success in life is based on hard work and but others think there are more important factors like money and . Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 雙邊討論(140215)
科技類
1. Children can learn from watching . Therefore children should be to watch regularly both at home and at school. Do you agree or disagree? 單邊(140517)
2. Some people think that printed books are no longer necessary in this digital era as all writings can be stored . Others think that printed books still play important roles. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. 雙邊(140313)
3. In most countries with the of the use of the Internet people have more freedom to choose to work and study at home instead of traveling to work or college. Do the outweigh the ? 單邊(優(yōu)缺點)(140426)
媒體類：
1. Nowadays a lot of TV aim at children. What are the effects of this on children? Should TV be ? 混合類(140424)
教育類
1. Some say that the purpose of education is to prepare to be useful to the society. Others say that the purpose of education is to achieve personal ambitions. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. 雙邊(140412)
2. Children find it difficult to on or pay attention to school. What are the reasons? How can we solve this problem? 報告類(140118)
3. Some people think it is easier for adults to learn practical skills (such as computer skills) by while others believe it is better to learn with a teacher in classroom. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion. 雙邊(140619)
4. Educating children is expensive and in some countries pay some or all of the costs. Do the outweigh the ? 單邊(優(yōu)缺點)(140222)
5. Many young people leave school with a negative attitude. What are the reasons? How can we encourage young people to study? 報告類(140524)
6. Some people think young people should be required to have full time education until they are at least 18 years old. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 單邊(140308)
四、考情分析
大作文話題類型1月9日-6月28日(共24次)
大作文題型
大作文辯論型題目分類
根據(jù)所繪制出來的表格，不難得出幾個結(jié)論：
首先，就大作文的考試題型而言，辯論型考題(79%)是考試的重點，其中以同不同意(67%)的考查方式為主旋律。其次考查重點是雙觀點的題型，但較往年相比，考的頻率較低，只出現(xiàn)了4次。報告類上半年出現(xiàn)的頻率非常低，只考了2次。
其次，就考試的話題而言，2014年大作文考查重點話題主要分布在社會和教育類兩大話題上。教育類的話題向來都是重中之重，本年度上半階段的教育話題主要與兒童教育相關(guān)，考查如何幫助兒童集中學(xué)習(xí)注意力，*是否該承擔兒童教育費用，兒童是否該被鼓勵在學(xué)校和家里有規(guī)律的看電視等。社會類話題的考查點則相對較多，尤其涉及年輕人的就業(yè)觀(在一個崗位久待還是頻繁跳槽)方面考了好幾次。窮人富人是否需要收入平等化?男女是否需要家務(wù)平等化?平等方面的出題點也備受青睞。還有公共設(shè)施方面的出題點，關(guān)于公共場所是否需要多建公園?這些都是社會類的重點考查方向。
*，*，抽象類，媒體類都只出現(xiàn)了一次，與往年相比，*與媒體的考試頻率有所下降。當然*類的考題在教育類和環(huán)境類話題里也有涉及，所以本身各種話題之間都會有相互的聯(lián)系。從整個雅思考試分析，可以把考試話題歸為類，上半年的考試主要集中在重點的幾大類，還有很多相對較冷門的類別沒有出現(xiàn)。
通過上述分析，我們可以總結(jié)出小作文下半年的出題趨勢：
小作文：
1. 線圖自1月以來，除了連考流程和地圖的3月和5月外，幾乎每個月都會出現(xiàn)。我們不難得出，出現(xiàn)流程地圖的時候，相對簡單的線圖就會退位。但其它時候，線圖應(yīng)該作為每月的必考重點。而出現(xiàn)線多的時候，表格也會相應(yīng)出現(xiàn)，大多數(shù)都是以動態(tài)為主。所以，今年的小作文難度系數(shù)較為不均衡?？忌诳记靶枰龊幂^為充分的準備。
2. 從上面的圖表統(tǒng)計中可以很明顯的發(fā)現(xiàn)，在上半年的考試中，柱圖和餅圖的比例較往年相比有所下降，尤其是餅圖，令人跌破眼鏡，只出現(xiàn)了一次。所以在下半年的考試中，餅圖的考試頻率肯定會有所上升，考生在備考時應(yīng)該予以重視。
3. 數(shù)據(jù)題依然是考試的重中之重，并且都是以動態(tài)與靜態(tài)為主旋律。在上半年頻繁考動態(tài)題的同時(除了柱圖動態(tài)與靜態(tài)的比例較為適中外，餅圖，線圖與表格題基本以動態(tài)考試為主)，預(yù)計在下半年的考試中，動態(tài)依然是考試重點，但靜態(tài)圖的考試比例會有所上升，考生的備考重心可以在靜態(tài)圖上多放一點。考生在備考的過程中，可以對靜態(tài)與動態(tài)分類練習(xí)，各個擊破，掌握兩種圖形的特點。經(jīng)過充分的練習(xí)，各種數(shù)據(jù)題才會得心應(yīng)手。
4. 就非數(shù)據(jù)題而言，今年的出題比較反常。去年2013主要出現(xiàn)在2、4、5、8、9、10月，其中2月出現(xiàn)2次;今年上半年分別出現(xiàn)在1、3、5、6月中。其中3月和5月是流程和地圖題集中出現(xiàn)的時候，都出現(xiàn)了2次，分別在月首月尾。因此，隔月出現(xiàn)并且連考的頻率應(yīng)該會繼續(xù)保持。下半年出現(xiàn)幾率在3次左右?？忌谝詳?shù)據(jù)題為主的同時，也要適當準備非數(shù)據(jù)題的出現(xiàn)，以不變應(yīng)萬變，即使出現(xiàn)反規(guī)律的情況，也可以泰然處之。
大作文：
1. 就考試的題型而言，上半年的考試大量考查了辯論型中的同不同意題型。這個趨勢在下半年依然會持續(xù)，所以重點方向要把握清楚。但是上半年對辯論題中的雙邊討論型只考查了4次，下半年的考試中肯定會有所增加。按照往年的出題規(guī)律，報告類的題目整年考查百分比在27%，上半年只考了2次，所以下半年必定是報告類和混合類考查的高峰期，在備考過程中需要重點注意。
2. 社會類考題成了今年上半年的大作文考試冠軍，涉及的方面也涵蓋了方方面面。由于社會類本身是個大方向，包含了人們生活的方方面面，從細節(jié)素材上來說，積累起來非常不容易。但其中的出題大方向應(yīng)該要清晰，主要是從人們的就業(yè)，生活水平，基礎(chǔ)設(shè)施，男女平等，老齡化等方向出題。當然，建議平時也多做一些額外的積累，多閱讀一些社會類相關(guān)的范文，多關(guān)注一些與話題相關(guān)的熱點新聞或者評論來豐富自己的思路。
3. 就考試話題方面而言，今年尚未考到過犯罪，動物，老齡化等話題，下半年的考試里面預(yù)計會出現(xiàn)此類話題。但此類話題相對其它話題來說在詞匯和素材方面比較難，尤其對于一些沒有社會閱歷的考生，可能會毫無想法與思路，需要考生有相應(yīng)的準備，方可胸有成竹。同時，抽象類，科技類，環(huán)境類，媒體與文化類話題雖然在上半年有出現(xiàn)，但是題目出得不多，下半年的概率會比較高，烤鴨們在備考過程中需要重點準備相應(yīng)的話題詞匯和思路。
4. 再說到一直是歷年雅思寫作的考試重點教育類，是今年繼社會類考題的重點，從上半年的考試中可以發(fā)現(xiàn)，每個月必考1次或以上，下半年還會延續(xù)這樣的規(guī)律。并且從6月份的考試可以看出，教育類話題從之前的兒童教育主線開始往教育延伸方向拓展，所以接下來的教育類話題中預(yù)計會出現(xiàn)更多新的方向。但由于教育類話題從來不缺乏討論，往往在這方面積累了不少思路和素材，所以學(xué)會融會貫通即可。

雅思英文作文（只需150字左右）。要求精辟，有深度。

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Who should be most for children's education? Give your opinion and reasons for it. You should write at least 250 words.
You should use your own ideas, knowledge and and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.
Sample Answer
It seems to me that there is a clear-cut answer to this question. Although in the early years of a child's life parents are the principal educators, that role is soon assumed very largely by the child's teachers. Even elder brothers and sisters, who may give good advice, can never take the place of teachers in molding a child's mind.
First and foremost, teachers know best in terms of education. They are educators, and as such they are better equipped with expertise in teaching. It is in schools, too, that children make friends and learn how to act in a socially manner. Teachers know best how to organize, motivate and their students. , as children spend most of their time in schools, teachers have more influence on them than their parents do.
Parents, on the other hand, are mostly either too busy to spend time with their children, or are ignorant of the right way to educate them. This is not to say that parents can shirk (refuse to take) their for educating their children. Parenting is an important factor that shapes and character formation in children. Failure to take such as parents.
, given the of teachers and the time they spend with their students, it is clear that the burden of educating children falls upon the shoulders of teachers.

2021年8月9日雅思考試大作文真題

雅思考試大作文真題：

Many museums and sites are mainly visited by tourists, not local people. Why is this the case and what can be done to attract local people?

解析&審題：

題材：旅游

題型：原因分析及解決辦法

關(guān)鍵詞：tourists + local people + museums and sites

需要討論的觀點：為什么本地人不訪問當?shù)夭┪镳^和歷史遺跡?

建議思路：原因分析+解決辦法

復(fù)現(xiàn)情況：2015年2月7日原題

關(guān)于 “museum”(博物館)的雅思寫作真題：

1. Some museums charge visitors for admission while others are free. Do you think the of free admission to museum outweigh its ? (2012/8/25)博物館應(yīng)該收費嗎?

2. Museums are getting less important, when people can have access to on the Internet. To what extent do you agree or disagree? (2010/12/4)互聯(lián)網(wǎng)時代，博物館不重要了嗎?

3. Report shows that it is expensive to keep museums open to public. Find the best way to fund museums among these funding —, , . (2021/10/20)博物館的費用該誰支持：*，企業(yè)還是個人?

4. Some people claim that public museums and art galleries will be not be needed because people can see objects and works of art by using a computer. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion?(2021/8/31)網(wǎng)絡(luò)時代還需要博物館和藝術(shù)館嗎?

本題的核心問題很明顯：很多博物館和景點只有外地人去，當?shù)厝瞬蝗?。請問這是什么原因?怎樣才能吸引當?shù)厝巳タ?本地人不去參觀當?shù)鼐包c，原因可能是他們對這些景點已經(jīng)非常熟悉，沒有新鮮感了，他們不愿意為自己熟悉的東西支付門票。如何吸引當?shù)厝巳⒂^?措施無非是組織新穎的活動，引入與當?shù)匚幕煌膬?nèi)容，等等。

高分范文：

Nowadays, there is a growing tendency that many museums and sites, which seem less for local dwellers, are mainly visited by tourists from other parts of the world. As for the reasons and solutions, my points are listed as follows.

First, as the saying goes, breeds boredom. People always prefer things that they have never seen before or that belong to others. Such is human nature that people do not have curiosity about what they are familiar with. As most local people are familiar with the history and culture of their own city, they prefer to pay a visit to the museums and sites in other cities, so that they can different customs and cultures. What is more, some museums and sites require visitors to pay entrance fee, which further prevents the local people from visiting them. That is one of the main reasons why the local Beijing people would rather leave Beijing and visit other cities while crowds of tourists from other places flow to the prominent sites in the city, such as the Great Wall and The Temple of Heaven.

Several measures should be adopted to attract more local people. First of all, the local museums and sites should provide a greater variety of rather than focus on the local elements only. For example, they can hold cultural regularly and encourage local people to be the or . Moreover, it is advisable for museums and sites to offer special discounts for locals or more , carry out the free-admission policy. Last, greater effort should be made by to the publicity of local sites and spark people’s interest in local culture.

以上就是小編整理的2021年8月9日雅思考試大作文真題。更多關(guān)于雅思考試的備考技巧，備考干貨，新聞資訊等內(nèi)容，小編會持續(xù)更新。希望各位考生都能認真?zhèn)淇迹〉脻M意的成績。

雅思考試有哪些常見的寫作技巧？

雅思寫作部分兩篇文章的字數(shù)要求是不一樣的。大作文必須完成250字以上寫作任務(wù)，而小作文150字以上。根據(jù)這一指令，建議考生較為合理的時間分配為大作文40分鐘，小作文20分鐘。另外，大作文占寫作總值的60%，小作文為40%，從這分值的權(quán)重來看，時間上2：1的分配也是相當合理的。
所以，要想成功完成大作文任務(wù)一定要把時間控制在40分鐘左右，前后不超出5分鐘。
那么如何充分利用這40分鐘，完成一篇基本令人滿意的文章呢?
步驟一：審題(3 分鐘)
審題是有效完成任務(wù)的*步，也是最關(guān)鍵的一步。從評分標準看，審題的正確與否與“Task Response”有著直接的聯(lián)系。而在當前模板泛濫，文章千篇一律的大環(huán)境下，有效審題是突破六分的一條準繩。不少考生在審題時，要么蜻蜓點水、草草一讀，要么只關(guān)注題目中詞的同義轉(zhuǎn)換。如此讀題，都有可能對之后的文章撰寫方向造成偏差。而建議考生采取的有效的讀題方法應(yīng)為：
通讀題目，了解大意。
細讀題目，分析句子間的邏輯關(guān)系。
再讀題目，辨別關(guān)鍵詞，區(qū)分主題詞和限定詞，推測考官的出題意圖。
由于大部分考生只作到了讀題的*步，所以出現(xiàn)離題或部分離題的可能性很大。以下面這個考題為例：
There are more workers to work from home and more students to study from home. This is because the computer is more and more easily and cheaper. Do you think it is a positive or negative ?
通讀題目，了解大意。
當前有越來越多的工人在家里工作，有越來越多的學(xué)生在家里學(xué)習(xí)。這是因為電腦技術(shù)越來越容易獲得，也越來越便宜了。你認為這是個正面的還是負面的發(fā)展趨勢?
備注：題中的有不少考生不理解，對審題的準確性會造成一定影響。
細讀題目，分析句子間的邏輯關(guān)系。
要把握題目中的句子間邏輯關(guān)系，關(guān)鍵是能讀懂代詞“this”; “it”的具體指代。
“this”是指*句話。
“it”可理解為前兩句所呈現(xiàn)的這一現(xiàn)象。為了使文章寫作方向更為明確，這里可把it 概括為：
the wider usage of computer in working or studying from home
再讀題目，辨別關(guān)鍵詞，區(qū)分主題詞和限定詞，推測考官的出題意圖。
主題詞：Computer in working or studying from home
限定詞：positive or negative
不容忽視的詞：easily and cheaper
題目信息解構(gòu)：
(topic) positive(benefits)
Computer in working or studying from home
↑ (causes) Negative (drawbacks)
Easily and cheaper
對題目做出如上分析，確保撰寫的文章能包含以上的信息，審題這關(guān)絕對能過。
以上用時不超過3分鐘。
步驟二：列大綱(3分鐘)
根據(jù)以上的題目解構(gòu)信息，尋找關(guān)鍵詞的下義詞和衍生詞，根據(jù)已有素材確定寫作框架。
如：
Computer ：on-line， PC， laptop， broadband
Working from home： Fashion designer; ; ; ; writer; music composer，
artists Studying from home： on-line course， the disable who are difficult to move; course in the foreign country
Cheaper： on-line IELTS course --several hundred RMB
Class IELTS course -- several thousand RMB
Easily ： in city-- at least one PC every house
Broadband：almost every house; school
Net bar： almost every
Outline：
2 ：
Computer in home-study and home- work (topic)
Positive (opinion)
2 Body：
Benefits of studying from home：
Cheaper--- IELTS course (on-line /class)
Freer--- white collar for further education in free time
Benefits of working from home：
Artists(music composer/fashion designer)---- more
( /)---- more working
Drawbacks：
Lack self-control /( line-addicts)
2 ： trend( with self-)
備注：在實戰(zhàn)考試中無需把大綱寫得如此詳細，但胸有成竹一定會使之后文章的寫作如魚得水。
步驟三：文章撰寫(30-35分鐘)
一般文章為4-5段，平均每段用時5-10分鐘
備注：建議考生在大作文寫作時一定要寫結(jié)論段，以體現(xiàn)文章的完整性。
步驟四：檢查(1-2分鐘)
此時，不宜做大的修改，把筆誤的部分改掉即可。

雅思教育類大作文怎么寫 *有范文

雅思大作文教育類寫作模板
教育類是雅思大作文寫作當中最為主要的一個類型，所以大家在備考自己的雅思大作文寫作的時候，一定會準備和教育類相關(guān)的話題。下面就為大家搜集整理了關(guān)于教育類的雅思大作文寫作模板，希望對大家有所幫助。
1) Many people believe that the main aim for education is to help graduates to find better jobs， while some people believe that education has wider benefits for and society. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 開頭寫四段
*教育好處：我覺得有wider benefits
個人：提高個人知識水平和道德標準，為了今后步入社會訓(xùn)練一些生活技能等。 社會：促進社會的發(fā)展，教育水平的提升會讓社會有更好的發(fā)展，公眾道德的提升降低犯罪率。
讓步：確實找工作是*教育的目標之一，但是它不是全部。 總結(jié)
2) The thinks that education system should be up to date. The following are a list of the subjects taught in school. Which two do you think are the most important subjects and which one is the least important to young people? sports economic physics music history
geography foreign languages 物理和數(shù)學(xué) 開頭
最為重要的：物理，數(shù)學(xué)：是各個*的基礎(chǔ)，提高人的思維能力和對世界的認知 最不重要： 文學(xué)和音樂： 只有極少數(shù)人從事有關(guān)工作不是每個人都需要的，真正要學(xué)好文學(xué)和音樂的人學(xué)要一定的天賦和熱愛的。而大多數(shù)的人對于音樂和文學(xué)的態(tài)度是作為一種消遣。所以不需要太多的力氣去學(xué)習(xí)。
讓步：當然學(xué)和重要沒有很清晰的評判標準，但是認為數(shù)學(xué)和物理比較重要還是一種最為理性的選擇。
3) Some people argue that teaching children of different abilities together benefits all of them. Others believe that children should be taught and given special treatment. Discuss both views and how do you think about it?
開頭：同意一起
*：
如果在一個班級是有不同能力的學(xué)生組成的一個團體，
這樣的話會讓這些學(xué)生之
間相互促進，

如果分開的話可能會讓那些能力稍微差一些的學(xué)生有被歧視的感覺加重心理
負擔導(dǎo)致學(xué)的更差，

讓那些能力好的學(xué)生有一種不應(yīng)該有的優(yōu)越感。
第二：
就社會而言，
整個社會也是有不同能力的人組成的包括公司和社區(qū)，
如果在一個
有比你能力高和比你能力低的人之間保持一個平衡的心態(tài)和正式自己的能力這是以后社會
生活需要的，因為社會是這樣的所以應(yīng)該從小讓孩子在這樣的環(huán)境中成長。
讓步：
承認對于一些有特殊才能的學(xué)生應(yīng)該區(qū)別對待比如說在某個*。
但是這種區(qū)別
對待也不能完全將其與其他學(xué)生隔離。
結(jié)尾：觀點。否則學(xué)生可能導(dǎo)致畸形的心理狀態(tài)。
4) Some people think teachers have a greater influence than parents on the
of a child’s and social skills. Do you agree or disagree?
開頭：家長影響大
*段：
家長跟孩子在一起的時候比較久，
有更多的機會去影響小孩子。
人的性格的形
成可能是在最初的那里年，
而在最初的那幾年當中對老師的接觸比較少。
家長除了在言行上
對小孩產(chǎn)生影響，
還可以根據(jù)自己的生活態(tài)度和思維方式給小孩創(chuàng)造一個成長的環(huán)境。
而一
個老師通常面對幾十個學(xué)生，沒有那么多精力去照顧每一個學(xué)生的成長。
第二段：
家長比老師對于學(xué)生的教育方式更加多樣，
因為家長有各種懲罰方式，
而老師
在教育和影響學(xué)生的有許多限制。老師能夠影響學(xué)生的智力無非就是在課上提供更多的知
識，而家長除了自己教，還可以給學(xué)生在這方面進行更多的投資。家長更加深入。
誠然，學(xué)生的成長是在老師和家長的共同影響下進行，但是家長占據(jù)了絕大部分。

雅思考試必寫作文

1. 雅思寫作真題范文都有哪些

2015年雅思寫作真題范文（2月14日）：TASK2:The use of mobile phone in certain places is just as as *** oking. do you think mobile should be banned like *** oking？解析：這道考題應(yīng)該算是比較簡單的，一是話題（手機使用）本身不難，是考生們所熟悉的。

另外，觀點也應(yīng)該容易得出。凡事必有利弊，科技運用的主動權(quán)一直都掌握在人們手中，人不能因噎廢食，科技產(chǎn)品如小小的智能手機只是工具，能否給人類帶來利取決于人們?nèi)绾稳ナ褂盟鼈儭?/p>

這里想說的是文章的布局，從劍橋官方范文來看，大多數(shù)有明顯傾向性的文章除了讓步段以外，都給出了兩個支持段。相比市面上所謂的高分范文或名師們給出的四段式，個人感覺此類結(jié)構(gòu)更合理，有側(cè)重點，說服力上也略勝一籌。

2015年雅思寫作真題范文欣賞：Mobile phones are very popular among modern people as they greatly their daily life. However some people think the wide use of mobile phones causes problems as well and be banned.Advocates of this believe that like *** oking which pollutes air, the use of mobile phones causes another kind of pollution, and that is noise. use of them can be quite annoying. For example, loud on mobile phones in public interrupt the pleasure of a quiet talk with friends. Besides, using mobile phones while driving can be a for drivers and as a main to road injuries. What is worse, excessive use of mobile phones can cause damage to people's health. , too much exposure to the tiny screen can be to young children's eyes.However, the important role of mobile phones in modern life cannot be denied. First, for the majority of users, mobile phones provide them with easy and that nothing else can offer. Compared with letters which take a couple of days or even weeks to reach the recipient, calls or short text messages via mobile phones enable users to stay connected with their social circles in a more efficient way.Moreover, new phones with multi-functions are pushed to the market due to the of new and they add more color to the dull routine. For instance, *** artphone users now can share photos or their thoughts on a certain topic wherever they go. Also, is important in modern life and the updated functions meet such need. New *** artphones enable users to pay all kinds of bills or make shopping payments , saving time for work or leisure. Unlike laptops or other advanced hi-tech devices, mobile phones are *** aller, lighter and easier to carry, therefore they gain among people who needs to travel and keep in touch with outside world.In , unlike *** oking which is harmful to *** okers and the , mobile phones can benefit people if they are properly used. Therefore I do not think it is advisable to ban mobile phones, but about how to use them in a civilized way are essential.。

2. 求雅思小作文范文

《我的奇思幻想》…暑copy假來臨了，我和媽媽打算去上海海迪士尼游玩，我多么希望在那里住一宿。

這可需要一筆不菲的費用呢！對了，我可以發(fā)明一棟飛bai在天空的房子?。?？！正好還不用花火車票錢了！真是一個兩全其美的辦法！它和農(nóng)村的房子沒什么兩樣，只是它的兩側(cè)長了一對巨大無比的翅膀，這能夠讓它在天空中飛翔，家里的所du有電器都是太陽能，連冰箱電視，洗衣機都是太陽能的，這棟房子不僅能飛上天，而且他平均每分鐘行駛100千米，從集寧到上海迪士尼用不了半小時，因為房子可以在天zhi空中快速行駛，所以大大節(jié)省了我們的時間，同時免去了舟車勞頓之苦。到哪里只需要交門票錢，這下坐車的錢，和住酒店的錢就可以省了，這就是我發(fā)明，天空中的dao房子，有了這棟房子，大家就可以帶著自己的家人出去游玩了。

3. 雅思作文怎么寫可以拿高分

很多同學(xué)把精力放在寫作的結(jié)構(gòu)或內(nèi)容上，這是致命的錯誤。雅思作文只要做到結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，內(nèi)容合理，不要要太變態(tài)或太強辭奪理即可。真正決定分數(shù)的是語言?。?！考官比較側(cè)重兩方面：句型結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯。

句型結(jié)構(gòu)方面：要有復(fù)雜句，如從句（這是基本的，6分的作文還是要的），非謂語動詞作定語、狀語、獨立結(jié)構(gòu)（這是7,8分要的），倒裝句（7,8分要的），強調(diào)句（6分的也可以用用，比較好用），被動語態(tài)（這個地球人都要會用），同位語（7,8要的，6分么也可以用用），插入語（7,8分要的，感覺會很好）等等。

詞匯：*學(xué)生往往對詞匯的理解有個誤區(qū)?。。】傆X得，詞用的越難越好，這是大錯特錯?。。∪タ纯磩蛳盗袕臅峁┑睦?，沒有一篇考官寫的例文是用了很多難詞的。詞匯主要是強調(diào)多樣性，即表達同一個意思，不要重復(fù)同樣的表達方式。比如：要說某某事很重要，*次如果用了important，第二次就不能再說了，可以換些表達，如, of great , have priority over。等等，這樣表達的方式就多樣了，考官就開心了，分數(shù)就高了。

平時多積累一些短語結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯，我看見新東方在線的論壇上就有不少實用的資源和帖子，培養(yǎng)自己的語感，這樣寫作文的時候也能比較流暢的寫出來。

4. 雅思大作文寫幾個觀點

do you agree or disagree的雅思作文題目，*是要有一個讓步觀點.對于每一個觀點段落，可以在該段的開頭就寫明一個主題句，清晰的闡明該段大意，當然也可以在結(jié)尾的時候?qū)懸粋€總結(jié)句，一個點明段落大意的主題句或者總結(jié)句可以為作文加分.discuss both views and give your own opinoin的題目，每個view段落里面寫幾個分論點是可以根據(jù)自己進行調(diào)整的，如果把分論點都寫在一個段落里面太長的話，可以通過自然的連接詞換一段寫，這些連接詞類似于：however、then、so等等.是要先表明觀點，表明觀點，不需要像前面兩段那樣復(fù)雜的論證，但是也要做一個簡單的說明.cause and effect的題目，每一段寫一個觀點即可，如果觀點過多，可以適當將兩個觀點作為一個段落來寫.有時間多到“雅思救星”上面看看，多練習(xí)、多看范文，對提高自己的雅思寫作能力也是非常有幫助的.。

5. 關(guān)于雅思作文

朗閣海外考試研究中心 趙平江說到雅思寫作，很多考生會不約而同地想到詞匯和語法。

的確，在寫作的四項評分標準中，這兩項指標占據(jù)了半壁江山。對于前者，考生們往往不敢怠慢，備考過程中的很大一部分時間和精力都是花在詞匯積累上的，而對于后者，卻因為單調(diào)、枯燥而常常被有意無意地忽視。

實際上，“磨刀不誤砍柴工”，只有把“語法”這把刀磨得亮亮的，才有可能連詞成句，連句成段，又快又好地完成雅思寫作任務(wù)。然而在平時的教學(xué)過程中，我們發(fā)現(xiàn)，語法問題成為了不少考生提高雅思寫作成績的絆腳石，甚至一些英語水平相對不錯的考生或是為了追求句子的復(fù)雜性或是由于粗心大意也會出現(xiàn)類似的問題，因此我們整理了雅思寫作中常見的語法問題，以期提醒廣大考生注意。

鑒于篇幅關(guān)系，對于時態(tài)混亂、主謂不一致、及物不及物誤用、可數(shù)不可數(shù)單復(fù)數(shù)錯誤等問題，這里就不一一贅述了，本文將主要從句子結(jié)構(gòu)層面展開探討。1、串句串句是不用連詞或標點而把兩個（或以上）獨立的句子串在一起的錯誤表達。

有些串句是不用任何標點間隔兩個甚至更多的句子；有些串句是在該用句號時濫用逗號，忽略了逗號本身沒有連接句子功能的原則。No one can deny the fact that air pollution is an extremely serious problem the city should take strong measures to deal with it.There is a general there days over education in many colleges and , one of the questions under debate is whether education is a lifetime study.修改和避免串句錯誤的常見方法：①用句號把原句分成兩個獨立的句子；②用連詞連接兩個句子；③用分號連接兩個句子。

如：No one can deny the fact that air pollution is an extremely serious problem, so the city should take strong measures to deal with it.There is a general there days over education in many colleges and ; one of the questions under debate is whether education is a lifetime study.2、破句破句是把不完整的句子當作獨立的句子來寫時發(fā)生的錯誤。以下是常見的幾個破句的例子：Students should be to take part-time job. Because it will benefit students and their family, even the society as a whole.點評：從屬連詞引起的破句。

常見的從屬連詞有after,unless, even if, even though ,since , before , when (whenever),because, if, who(whoever),while, as (as if ), which(whichever), although , so that, where(wherever), until, that等。像because這樣的從屬連詞開頭的從句是不能單獨存在的，它依賴于另一個句子方能使意義完整，也就是說單獨的從句本身就是破句。

修改后：Students should be to take part-time job because it will benefit students and their family, even the society as a whole.A large number of people think that they had pleted their education when they finished their schooling. Not realizing that a person's education is a most important aspect of his life.點評：分詞引起的破句。當分詞出現(xiàn)在一個短語或句子的開頭時常常會產(chǎn)生破句，而這樣的破句往往缺少主語或謂語動詞的一部分。

修改后：A large number of people think that they had pleted their education when they finished their schooling. They fail to realize that a person's education is a most important aspect of his life. travel has given rise to large numbers of . For example, retail, and .點評：增加細節(jié)引起的破句。往往以下面的詞語開頭：for example, also, except, such as, including, , among, like.修改后： travel has given rise to large numbers of in retail, and .Many point out that rural emigrants are putting pressure on control. And also to take already scarce city jobs.點評：缺少主語的破句。

用and之類連詞打頭的短語或句子居多，可通過使破句依附于前面的句子或加上主語的方式進行更正。修改后：Many point out that rural emigrants are putting pressure on control and also to take already scarce city jobs.3、錯誤的平行結(jié)構(gòu)所謂平行結(jié)構(gòu)，就是指兩個（或以上）意思并列的成份（包括單詞、詞組、從句和句子）在寫作時要用同等的語法形式表達，并保證邏輯上的一致，否則就破壞了其平行結(jié)構(gòu)。

①錯誤的并列In order to attract tourists, a lot of have been built and which have certain effects on the .點評：and who/and which 結(jié)構(gòu)是考生所犯的錯誤中最常見但最嚴重的一種，因為它導(dǎo)致從句與主句間一種不合邏輯的關(guān)系。修改后：In order to attract tourists, a lot of have been built, which have certain effects on the .②一系列平行結(jié)構(gòu)上的不正確使用Many people choose air because it is fast, offers and it is not 。

6. 雅思大作文范文

參加過雅思考試的同學(xué)都深有體會，跟許多烤鴨們一樣視雅思作文為雅思考試中的難中之難。

有此感的原因是，即使有觀點，看得懂題目，卻找不到合適的句子來表達，也無法寫出高分的文章。所以雅思培訓(xùn) 查看更多雅思培訓(xùn)的內(nèi)容>>查看雅思培訓(xùn)課程>>申請雅思培訓(xùn)試聽課程>>的專家們?yōu)楦魑谎潘伎忌鷤兛偨Y(jié)了大作文的必備句式，讓你輕松搞定雅思寫作。

以下是雅思考試短文寫作中使用率*、覆蓋面最廣的基本句式，每組句式的功能相同或相似，考生可根據(jù)自己的情況選擇其中的1-2個，做到能夠熟練正確地仿寫或套用。在這里雅思輔導(dǎo)老師需要提醒考生們，盲目的套用句式是不可取的，必須首先做到對這些句式的理解和熟悉，經(jīng)過大量的練習(xí)，才能輕松自如地應(yīng)用在自己的作文中。

一、表示原因 1、There are three reasons for this. 2、The reasons for this are as follows. 3、The reason for this is obvious. 4、The reason for this is not far to seek. 5、The reason for this is that。 6、We have good reason to believe that。

例如： There are three reasons for the changes that have taken place in our life. Firstly, people's living standard has been greatly improved. Secondly, most people are well paid, and they can afford what they need or like. Last but not least, more and more people prefer to enjoy modern life. 注：如考生寫*個句子沒有把握，可將其改寫成兩個句子。如：Great changes have taken place in our life. There are three reasons for this. 這樣寫可以避免套用中的表達失誤。

二、表示好處 1、It has the following . 2、It does us a lot of good. 3、It benefits us quite a lot. 4、It is to us. 5、It is of great benefit to us. 例如： Books are like friends. They can help us know the world better, and they can open our minds and widen our horizons. Therefore, reading is of great benefit to us. 三、表示壞處 1、It has more than . 2、It does us much harm. 3、It is harmful to us. 例如： However, divides into o. can also be harmful to us. It can do harm to our health and make us lazy if we spend too much time watching . 四、表示重要、必要、困難、方便、可能 1、It is important(necessary, difficult, , possible、for *** . to do sth. 2、We think it necessary to do sth. 3、It plays an important role in our life. 例如： Computers are now being used , whether in the , in schools or in business. Soon, puters will be found in every home, too. We have good reason to say that puters are playing an important role in our life and we have stepped into the Computer Age. 五、表示措施 1、We should take some effective measures. 2、We should try our best to overe (conquer、the . 3、We should do our utmost in doing sth. 4、We should solve the problems that we are (faced、with. 例如： The housing problem that we are with is being more and more serious. Therefore, we must take some effective measures to solve it. 六、表示變化 1、Some changes have taken place in the past five years. 2、A great change will certainly be produced in the world's . 3、The puter has brought about many changes in education. 例如： Some changes have taken place in people's diet in the past five years. The major reasons for these changes are not far to seek. Nowadays, more and more people are switching from grain to meat for protein, and from fruit and vegetable to milk for vitamins. 七、表示事實、現(xiàn)狀 1、We cannot ignore the fact that。 2、No one can deny the fact that。

3、There is no denying the fact that。 4、This is a that many people are in. 5、However, that's not the case. 例如： We cannot ignore the fact that brings with it the problems of pollution. To solve these problems, we can start by educating the public about the hazards of pollution. The on its part should also design stricter laws to promote a cleaner . 八、表示比較 1、Compared with A, B。

2、I prefer to read rather than watch TV. 3、There is a striking contrast beeen them. 例如： Compared with cars, bicycles have several besides being . Firstly, they do not consume natural resources of petroleum. Secondly, they do not cause the pollution problem. Last but not least, they to people's health by giving them due physical exercise. 九、表示數(shù)量 1、It has increased (decreased、from。to。

2、The in this city has now increased (decreased、to 800,000. 3、The output of July in this factory increased by 15% pared with that of January. 例如： With the of the living standard, the 。

7. 雅思小作文和大作文字數(shù)是不是分別超過150,250就可以了

雅思寫作對作文的字數(shù)要求是很嚴格的，小作文不少于150字，大作文不少于250個字。

作文要求只給了下限，很多考生就覺得，寫多一些就可以了。但是并不是多寫一點就會扣分，也不是剛剛好這么多字數(shù)就是*的。

對于雅思作文字數(shù)分析如下： 重復(fù)問題的字數(shù)是不算的。因此千萬不要照抄整個題目，除非原題中有一兩個無法找其他詞代替的，或者說是核心詞，那么可以保留。

所有詞都算數(shù)，但是雅思作文千萬要杜絕縮寫詞，那樣太不正式，一旦寫了必扣分！ 時間就是生命！別在考場上一個字一個字地數(shù)了，按行來計算！寫作并不是字數(shù)越多越好，如果你可以在規(guī)定時間內(nèi)寫到300個字以上，除非你的英語相當好！不然的話還是花點時間來組織全文或者檢查錯誤吧！畢竟質(zhì)量還是比數(shù)量重要的。*安排：小作文 150-170字 大作文 250-275字 。

雅思圖表作文寫作思路

在雅思A類小作文圖表題的寫作當中，學(xué)生會經(jīng)常碰到圖表看懂了，但因數(shù)據(jù)比較凌亂，找不出很明顯的特征，或者找到了很多特征，卻不知道用什么樣的順序，結(jié)構(gòu)和銜接方式把它們用“at least 150words”清晰的表達出來等類似問題。這時，學(xué)生所面臨主要不是語言方面的問題，而是思路方面的問題，即不知道應(yīng)該用什么樣的思路來把圖表當中的重要信息和規(guī)律特征有機，自然的聯(lián)系貫穿起來。筆者通過多年的雅思作文教學(xué)，總結(jié)出了一些有助于尋找圖表作文寫作思路的方法與技巧。本文中，將主要探討如何從圖表作文的“變量”作為突破口，尋求寫作的思路。

一，什么是 “變量”。

筆者對于“變量”的定義是：在圖表中影響數(shù)據(jù)變化的因素。比如說，在一個簡單的描述數(shù)據(jù)動態(tài)變化的線圖當中，影響數(shù)據(jù)變化的首要因素就是時間，因此時間就是一個最重要的變量。此外，常見的變量還會有年齡、性別、*等等。對于柱、線、餅來說，圖表中的“變量”通常表現(xiàn)為圖表中的坐標軸或者是圖例的說明，對于表格來說，通常是表格的首行或首列。

二，如何利用“變量”來尋找思路。

在一些變量較多(一般是三個或三個以上)的圖表中，因為數(shù)據(jù)的變化受到多個變量的影響，數(shù)據(jù)會顯得比較雜亂，造成分析圖表時一時難以抓住重點，這個時候，就可以通過尋找變量，從變量入手分析圖表，從而簡化思路，使文章變得條理清楚。下面筆者就以一道圖表題為例詳細分析如何利用“變量”來尋找思路：

WRITING TASK 1

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task

The graphs below show the types of music albums purchased by people in Britain according to sex and age.

Write a report for a lecturer the shown below.

You should write at least 150 words.

可以說這是一個比較復(fù)雜的柱形圖。當然按照傳統(tǒng)的方法寫這個圖也不難?？梢苑謩e針對三組圖，從橫軸的方向進行比較，然后把比較的結(jié)果一一記錄，*再縱向觀察一下有沒有一些全局特征進行總結(jié)。

那么如何通過變量的分析來寫這篇文章呢?下面我們來看一看分析的過程：

通過這樣的分析，我們得出了上面的(1)、(2)、(3)三條信息，也是這個圖表的主要特征，接下來，我們就可以輔以適當?shù)臄?shù)據(jù)支持、段落劃分和連接詞的選用，從而完成這篇圖表作文了。

三，總結(jié)與相關(guān)練習(xí)

其實一篇圖表作文寫作思路可以有很多，比如前面所分析的圖表就是很好的例子。只要能把圖表中重要的數(shù)據(jù)特征準確完整地描述，也就是達到了圖表作文平分標準中的task (任務(wù)完成度)這個評分標準。本篇所談到的從變量的角度去分析圖表只是尋找思路的方法之一，筆者認為在一些數(shù)據(jù)比較繁雜變量比較多的圖表尤其合適，下面是一些筆者在教學(xué)中發(fā)現(xiàn)適合變量思路的圖表題，供讀者參考。

WRITING TASK 1

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task

The tables below show the of young teenagers who were regular cigarette smokers in England in 1988, 1992, and 1998.

Write a report for a lecturer the shown below.

You should write at least 150 words.

* 變量為：年齡、性別、時間

WRITING TASK 1

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task

The two bar charts show the of male and female students in secondary and higher education for four different regions in the world.

Write a report for a lecturer the in the chart.

You should write at least 150 words.

在雅思寫作的過程中，一個好的思路是非常重要的，畢竟詞匯語法，大家都差不多，唯有好的思路是取得高分的關(guān)鍵，如果大家不知道如何才能夠有好的思路，可以好好的閱讀本篇文章，相信會對大家有所幫助的。更多關(guān)于雅思考試的報名入口，報名時間，成績查詢，報名費用，準考證打印入口及時間等問題，小編會及時更新。希望各位考生都能進入自己的理想院校。

以上是小編為大家分享的關(guān)于雅思圖表作文寫作思路的相關(guān)內(nèi)容，更多信息可以關(guān)注環(huán)球青藤分享更多干貨

雅思小作文

其實，雅思寫作的考官們也像智商為零一樣，喜歡「裝瘋賣傻」，但同時他們又好奇心爆棚，他們會在內(nèi)心不斷追問WHY，類似于「Why do you say so??」的這種讓你不得不面對，但有時又招架不住的問題。

所以，對付考官這種生物，尤其需要大家注意兩個字：邏輯——自圓其說、沒有漏洞、讓人信服

至于你說的越南考雅思，正好我們這邊有做雅思考團的經(jīng)驗。

除去聽力、閱讀兩項，越南雅思考試口語和寫作的優(yōu)勢明顯，但這也不是像很多網(wǎng)上的老師吹噓的那樣，隨便考就6.5。這樣的說法就帶有引誘甚至誤導(dǎo)的嫌疑。

我們先來看寫作。

越南雅思考試寫作的卷子難度和大陸雅思一致，但是有幾點明顯優(yōu)勢：

1、亞太區(qū)的卷子在題庫輪換中比大陸有規(guī)律，目前還不是太有反預(yù)測的情況，所以從預(yù)測的角度來說越南雅思考試更好猜題?？荚囂崆耙稽c了解提醒題型和復(fù)習(xí)方向，當然會更好！

2、亞太所有地區(qū)一張卷子，也就是說在考試前有一定概率提前了解一些信息，當然這不是說越南雅思考試要做答案，用答案范文，反而分數(shù)不會太高！

但只要有這個提前了解信息的可能性，哪怕不一定是準確的，但提前復(fù)習(xí)再結(jié)合自己的想法來答題，加上越南雅思考試前老師也會及時給考團成員分析講解任何他們問的有可能的題型，這就有了提分的可能。當然這樣的優(yōu)勢是整個亞太區(qū)尤其東南亞地區(qū)的，不僅僅是越南。這也是為什么很多*大陸雅思寫作一直在5.5分的考生去東南亞考試的原因。

3、閱卷量的確少！以2021.12.15的考試為例，越南河內(nèi)IDP整個考生人數(shù)是不到400人，而這些卷子在河內(nèi)IDP改。也就是組織一定量考官改400張寫作卷子。反觀*大陸那一場，整個華東區(qū)的卷子在上海中心批改。只南京一個城市三個考點就有將盡2000名雅思考生，全華東區(qū)數(shù)以萬計。不同的工作量，假設(shè)考官都一樣敬業(yè)和專業(yè)，越南雅思考試會改得相對仔細和公平。請注意，我這里說的是公平，也就是完整體現(xiàn)你的真實寫作水平和評分，不壓不揚，而不是一定給高分！但失誤和壓制現(xiàn)象一定會少很多！

*來看口語。

越南雅思考試口語的當季度題庫和大陸雅思一致，但是優(yōu)勢真的明顯。這也是很多雅思考生去越南考雅思或亞太區(qū)考試的最主要原因：

1、越南河內(nèi)IDP考場口語考官固定。

近兩年在越南，筆者總共遇到15位雅思口語考官。其中10位是常駐專職考官，他們不但做考官，也在IDP做雅思培訓(xùn)。另外5位是在人多時會來零散幫忙的考官。一場考試A類的口語大體會有5-8位考官，UKVI類別一般是2-5位考官?？脊賯兌疾凰闾邸類一般是人少的時候，周五下午半天、周六下午半天、周日一個上午。人最多的時候，周四下午半天，周五一天，周六下午半天，周日一天。UKVI類一般是人少的時候，周日一天。人最多的時候，周日一天，周一一天。而在這些時間段，考官還輪流上崗和休息。所以大多考官都在考試過程中比較耐心和nice。

2、考官更耐心。

越南河內(nèi)IDP70%的考官是鼓勵型考官，考試過程中不打斷，有引導(dǎo)。而且他們的評分會比較認真。有一位光頭耳釘中年考官和一位歲數(shù)很大的胖老太太，三部分的問題甚至?xí)f兩遍，并鼓勵考生多說。

而這些鼓勵型考官的給分普遍好于*大陸。常見的是5-6，5.5-6.5，5.5-7，4.5-5.5，高的有6－8.5的提升。這些都是真實數(shù)據(jù)和占據(jù)千名考生中75%的數(shù)據(jù)。有些多次帶學(xué)生到越南考雅思的老師看到考官是誰的時候，能根據(jù)學(xué)生的臨場答題能預(yù)測出分數(shù)了。

30%是挑剔型考官，不好的考官哪里都有。越南河內(nèi)IDP的挑剔型考官的特點是：全程比較嚴肅，不茍言笑。（當然也有和考生聊得很開心的時候，這就因考生而異，因水平而異。）對于啰嗦和語言表達能力不強的同學(xué)會打斷。另外給分不如鼓勵型考官。但我們從兩年的數(shù)據(jù)來看，這種考官給的一般是考生一貫水平的分數(shù)，比如在大陸一直5-5.5的口語考生，在這幾個考官手上的得分也是5.5左右。

所以不是每個人去越南考口語就一定提升分數(shù)。在大陸口語一直是5分以下的同學(xué)，哪里考都不占優(yōu)勢。但是在亞太區(qū)和越南，這樣的同學(xué)遇到鼓勵型考官，有到5.5的紀錄。

偏鋒出國作為雅思官方的合作伙伴，多次受邀參加雅思官方培訓(xùn)，嚴格按照官方*評分標準指導(dǎo)學(xué)員備考。我們是一群一心鉆研教學(xué)的教書匠，校長金長麟老師從事雅思教學(xué)十九年，你的四科主講老師相加超過三十年教齡，均海外名校歸國；你的 VIP 教輔 *來自名校英專/雅思 7+。

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