Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

深圳雅思英語怎么提升?提升雅思我們首先會關注到以下這些問題:

* 舉例冗長,足足花了約60個單詞,結果就是,段落重心偏移至這個"小

故事"上,而不是例子前的分論點,例子就失去了它作為論證證據的作用;

* 措辭口語化,選詞隨意;

* 表述模糊,包括a lot of aspects, a specific environment等。

解析:

* 信息濃縮,豐富語義,讓例子核心信息成為句子的主干:acquiring 

English enables them to continue tertiary education,這樣語義豐

富的一個長句子印證前面的觀點;

* 信息濃縮,"寫論文、和導師討論專業(yè)問題、參加社會活動"等一系列

流水賬式的內容,改寫為"English has become the major language of 

monograph and academic forum";

* 選詞,詞匯的選取要避免口語化,詞義要;

* set up for 為…作準備

* acquire習得

* enable 使能夠

* tertiary education *教育

* monograph 專著

* academic forum 學術講座