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托福高分范文-托福獨立寫作滿分范文

日期:2025-02-21     瀏覽:56    來源:楊陽老師
核心提示:托福寫作遭遇陌生話題缺乏思路是常見問題,容易影響考生發(fā)揮和心態(tài)。因此大家需要在備考中多接觸各類作文話題了解寫法思路,積累些

托福寫作遭遇陌生話題缺乏思路是常見問題,容易影響考生發(fā)揮和心態(tài)。因此大家需要在備考中多接觸各類作文話題了解寫法思路,積累些高分范文經(jīng)驗提前做好準備。下面小編會帶來托福寫作難點話題的思路解析和高分范文賞析。

托福寫作難點話題一覽

Do you like a new high school being built in your community?

It has recently been announced that a new high school may be built in your community. Do you support or oppose this plan? Why? Use specific reasons and details in your answer.

寫作思路展開結(jié)構(gòu)分析

說到教育的話題一般以支持為主比較容易拓展思路。大家可以說教育是百年大計(a

fundamental

task crucial for generations to come),當然要同意。 社區(qū)的孩子就近上學很方便,減少了路上可能發(fā)生交通事故的可能性; 可以提高社區(qū)文化氛圍(將有更多的書店,音像店); 進而促進社區(qū)經(jīng)濟繁榮;提高就業(yè)率等等。 盡管社區(qū)可能變得嘈雜一些,但是總體上還是應該支持的。

本話題高分范文賞析

The basic prerequisite of success for any community is the education of its citizens. Because the advantages of a high school education in my town are presently available to only a limited number of students every year, I wholeheartedly support the

construction

of a new school facility to serve our community. The competition to get into high school in my town is fierce. There are three middle schools in town, but only one high school. Because the number of applicants to the single high school far exceeds the available spaces in the high school, only the richest and most qualified students are able to go to school. The skills taught in high school including advanced math, analysis, and high-level reading and writing are important to every citizen, no matter what profession they later choose. Even if they are manual laborers, the

ability

to critically analyze problems taught in high school will make them better and more highly skilled workers. Beyond teaching practical skills to more local children, another high school will give children more opportunity to attend college. Holding a college degree is almost the only way a person can be assured of getting a stable, high paying job. Even a degree from a two or three year junior college can mean the ability to make a salary thousands of yuan annually higher than a high school diploma. Because our current high school is so small, many bright children with promising college careers ahead of them have no way of even obtaining the high school diploma! We must make sure the road to higher education remains open for as many young people as possible. Finally, if we cannot afford to open this high school, our town will have a serious problem with the number of unemployed youths who graduate from middle school with nothing to do. If they cannot find good jobs, they might be tempted to commit crimes, use drugs, or, if they are girls, engage in prostitution. Giving these children another option would both save them and help society.

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