雅思寫作萬年難提分? 還永遠(yuǎn)不知道自己錯在哪兒? 今天小編總結(jié)了各類烤鴨們經(jīng)典的6種錯誤, 希望同學(xué)們在接下來的考試中 都能成功避免!
01不一致
所謂不一致不光指主謂不一致,它還包括了數(shù)的不一致時態(tài)不一致及代詞不一致等.
例1. when>剖析:one是單數(shù)第三人稱,因而本句的have應(yīng)改為has ;同理,want應(yīng)改為wants.本句是典型的主謂不一致.
改為:>
02修飾語錯位
英語與漢語不同,同一個修飾語置于句子不同的位置,句子的含義可能引起變化.對于這一點(diǎn)學(xué)生往往沒有引起足夠的,因而造成了不必要的誤解.
例1. i believe i can do it well and i will better know the world outside the campus.
剖析:better位置不當(dāng),應(yīng)置于句末.
03句子不完整
在口語中,交際雙方可借助手勢語氣上下文等,不完整的句子完全可以被理解.可是書面語就不同了,句子結(jié)構(gòu)不完整會令意思表達(dá)不清,這種情況常常發(fā)生在主句寫完以后,筆者又想加些補(bǔ)充說明時發(fā)生.
例1. there are many ways to know the society. for example by tv ,radio ,newspaper and so>
剖析:本句后半部分"for example by tv ,radio ,newspaper and so>
改為:there are many ways to know society ,for example ,by tv ,radio ,and newspaper.
04懸垂修飾語
所謂懸垂修飾語是指句首的短語與后面句子的邏輯關(guān)系混亂不清.例如:at the age of ten, my grandfather died. 這句中"at the age of ten"只點(diǎn)出十歲時,但沒有說明” 誰”十歲時.按一般推理不可能是my grandfather, 如果我們把這個懸垂修飾語改明確一點(diǎn),全句就不那么費(fèi)解了.
改為:when i was ten, my grandfather died.
例1. to do well in college, good grades are essential.
剖析:句中不定式短語 “to do well in college” 的邏輯主語不清楚.
改為:to do well in college, a student needs good grades.
“詞性誤用”常表現(xiàn)為:介詞當(dāng)動詞用;形容詞當(dāng)副詞用;名詞當(dāng)動詞用等.
例1. none can negative the importance of money.
剖析:negative 系形容詞,誤作動詞。
改為:none can deny the importance of money.
06指代不清
指代不清主要講的是代詞與被指代的人或物關(guān)系不清,或者先后所用的代詞不一致。試看下面這一句:mary was friendly to my sister because she wanted her to be her bridesmaid.瑪麗和我姐姐很要好,因為她要她做她的伴娘。
讀完上面這一句話,讀者無法明確地判斷兩位姑娘中誰將結(jié)婚,誰將當(dāng)伴娘。如果我們把易于引起誤解的代詞的所指對象加以明確,意思就一目了然了。這個句子可改為:mary was friendly to my sister because she wanted my sister to be her bridesmaid.
例1. and we can also know the society by serving it yourself.
剖析:句中人稱代詞we 和反身代詞yourself指代不一致。改為:we can also know society by serving it ourselves.
以上就是小編為大家整理的寫作中常犯的一些錯誤,當(dāng)然雅思寫作非一日之功,想要有效提高雅思成績還是需要系統(tǒng)的提分指導(dǎo)。